Ok what do you think of my poem? It is published and has copywrite, i just want public feedback.

Christmas Cheer

Now is the time to give and share while joy and laughter is filling the air.
How 'bout we make some chocolate mice,
and give them to everyone, naughty or nice.
Buid a snowman,
give him a glove,
or maybe a tophat,
but definately love!
Go outside and you will see, Carollers, as happy as can be, singing "Joy to the world" with such great glee.
Go inside,
break out the mugs,
Make some hot cocoa,
Put on your uggs!
Christmas laughter, Christmas cheer,
Now is really the best time of the year.

Thanks.

And if you want to read more of my UNPUBLISHED works, please email me at
drummergal59@gmail.com
And make the subject of the message: Poem

Thanks!